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Jan. 13th, 2012 | 02:57 pm
posted by: ienablu in erasureathon

Title: a hole cut inside
Original text(s) erased: One (link)
Erased by: ienablu
Original text by: grim_lupine
Fandom (of original text): X-Men: First Class
Fandom (of erasure): not specific
Notes: Sorry for the late posting, I accidentally wrote down the wrong final date. It's a touch short, but that's just because I like shorter poetry.




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a hole cut inside his head
;
like a kiss or a gunshot or

you    

are

n o t




a  l    o                      n           e





but
 
even now. We could be happy
                     he can't do it.

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Comments {6}

a girl who knew how to be happy even when sad

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from: sgmajorshipper
date: Jan. 13th, 2012 10:00 pm (UTC)
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Oh, wow, this is so very pretty. And I love the style you took with it. And the graphic is just <3

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Sophie

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from: alias_sqbr
date: Jan. 13th, 2012 10:58 pm (UTC)
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Very nice! I really like the poem, and the aesthetics, and the way the two fit together. The way you have both literal and metaphorical holes is very clever.

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~*SASSQUATCH*~

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from: zempasuchil
date: Jan. 13th, 2012 11:23 pm (UTC)
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OOOOO THIS IS AWESOME. It's not only pretty, you've done some really sweet stuff connecting the imagery (even as simple as the shapes are) to the text with a hole cut inside his head. I like, a lot :D

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—Yo no digo esta canción sino a quién conmigo va.

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from: xenoamorist
date: Jan. 13th, 2012 11:26 pm (UTC)
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Oh God, this is gorgeous and amazing. The art is creative and beautiful, and the text is great is well. Fabulous job :)

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Stanley's Intended

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from: alice_pike
date: Jan. 14th, 2012 12:48 am (UTC)
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Whaaaattt. This is flippin' awesome.

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