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Peripheral Vision

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Jan. 8th, 2012 | 02:03 pm
posted by: florahart in erasureathon

Title: Peripheral Vision
Original text(s) erased: Fifteen Feet of Pure White Snow
Erased by: florahart
Original text by: wandersfound
Fandom (of original text): Fireflly
Fandom (of erasure): could still be Firefly, but doesn't have to be.
A/N: with apologies for tardiness.




swing the knife
turn around
pull away
draw a line

careful
crazy

grin maniacally
out of her grasp
grip the hilt
for a moment

confused
serene

duck backward
metal slides
reaching out
take it away

loading
rush

tiptoe to the edge
press one foot
turn to look
drag her back

obedient
gruff

intention
for a moment confused
break away
won’t be caught

waiting
instinctively

hardness and distance
quick and messy
blow a kiss
check the barrel

shrug

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